Paul’s Journey

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This is my first submission here. I don’t claim to be a good writer. I just write things that I like. There are so many stories running through my head that I will more than likely write more. Constructive criticism is welcome. Negative comments will be ignored. If you like it, then it’s great. If you don’t, it isn’t going to bother me. I write more for myself than anyone else. Having said all that, enjoy. All characters are 18 or older and purely fictional.


People always think twins get along the best.

Like we have some kind of psychic connection that lets us see into each other’s mind. People assume that we are so alike that there is no way anything could cause us to fight. If you are not a twin you wouldn’t really understand what twins go through. Imagine having someone that you had to share everything with. Punishment was even something we shared. It is hard to find your own identity when your parents force you to be the same.

I was born on a hot night in August. The only problem with that is that my twin brother was born one minute earlier. Technically, Eric is my older brother. An advantage he was always shoving into my face every chance he got. I often wondered how things would have gone had I been born first. My parents didn’t believe in this whole oldest gets the benefits kind of idea, however, kids will exploit any advantage they have over their siblings.

I guess Eric and I got along ok. We acted a lot like other brothers. We liked to hang out and do stuff together. Eric and I always had each other’s back. When he tried to stand up to a school bully and the bully laughed at him. I was there to back him up. The bully got scared and backed down. I guess the thought of fighting both of us was a little more than he could chew. There were other times when Eric would get into trouble and his dear younger brother would bail him out.

Eric was kind of a ladies man. Sometimes he would mess with some other guy’s lady and I would have to smooth things over. Why wouldn’t they love the guy? He was 6’4″, about 175lbs, and had hazel eyes. Plus, and I hate the fact that I know this; he had an 8″ dick. What wasn’t to love?

I, on the other hand, was 5’10” and 200lbs. That’s right I was the fat kid. I have heard all the fat jokes. It never really bothered me. I couldn’t have cared less what other people thought of my weight. I was too busy enjoying the gobs and gobs of horrible food I was eating. I didn’t realize how bad I had gotten until I was a 21 year old virgin. With an average six inch penis, no wonder I wasn’t getting laid. It is amazing how sex can be a great motivator to lose weight.

What most people don’t get is that losing weight isn’t about going on diets and starving oneself. It is all about life change. You want to lose the weight you have to change your life not just the food. So, I started eating more vegetables, fruits, whole grain wheat, and white meats only. I also started to work out. I didn’t do a lot of muscle building, my goal was to work on my cardio and lose the weight.

Low and behold, by the time I had reached my junior year in college I was at a very trim 140lbs. At my biggest, I had reached 280lbs. I lost a whole other person off of my body and I felt great. My confidence was at an all-time high as well, especially since I had a girl come up to me and ask me out, while I was having lunch at the snack bar.

“HI my name is Christy.”

“Hi Christy, my name is Paul. Please have a seat.”

“Thank you.”

“So Christy, what is it that I can help you with?”

“You don’t have much experience with women do you?”

“No, not really.”

“I think that it’s kind of cute. Do you maybe want to go somewhere and get a coffee?”


“Great let’s go.”

We spent the better part of the afternoon talking about all kinds of things. That evening we ended up back at my apartment. She was primed for a little action. I had to tell her the truth. We were making out on my bed when I pulled back for a minute.

“What’s wrong?” she looked amazing with her long brown hair and hazel eyes. I was slowly taking in her features. Those pert breast and slim waist were calling to me.

“Paul, what’s wrong?” Her question brought me out of my day dream.

“Sorry, it’s just that I need to tell you something.”

“What, you don’t have an STD or something do you?”

“No actually quite the opposite. I’m… Geez this is embarrassing.”

“Come on Paul out with it!”

“I’m kind of a virgin.”

She literally gasped at my revelation. I put my head down and looked at the floor. I knew she wouldn’t want to have sex with a guy as inexperienced as me. I felt her hand slide under my chin and pull my eyes even with hers.

“It’s ok Paul. I think that’s hot.”

She pushed me onto my back and straddled my hips. Ok, this was going better than expected. After my huge revelation, I figured she wouldn’t want anything to do with me. I was wrong and I couldn’t be happier.

“Just relax ,Paul. You escort mecidiyeköy won’t last very long the first time. Hopefully, you can recover quickly.”

She reached down and started unbuckling my belt and genes. She gingerly slid off my lap and pulled off my pants. She could see the obvious bulge in my boxers.

“MMMMM, at least you have a nice size tool for me to work with. This should be fun.”

With my boxer clad cock almost exposed she began to undress slowly. Her white sweater was easily pulled over her head and her black lace bra. I was instantly drawn to the perfect size and shape of her pare shaped breast. She gracefully reached behind her and unclasped her bra. As the item of clothing hit the floor, I was greeted with the most beautiful sight I had ever seen. Her breasts were firm and rode high on her chest. They were capped by these lovely pink nipples that were about pencil eraser size. I couldn’t help but grin like a kid who had gotten away with the cookie.

“What are you grinning at?”

“Oh, just the most beautiful woman I have ever seen.”

“Ooooh, such a smooth talker. Flattery will get you everywhere.”

If I thought her breast were amazing, I was in for a real treat. She turned her attention to her dark blue genes. They were skin tight and if their shape was any indication she had the perfect ass and shapely legs. They were a tight fit and she literally had to peel them off. When she stood back up, I saw no panties, but the most beautiful womanhood I had ever seen. Completely shaven and perfectly shaped, Christy’s little love box was breath taking. I was kind of surprised that a woman this beautiful would even waste her time with me.

“I’ll make you a deal, Paul. I’ll suck you off and eat your cum, and while you recover you can eat my little pussy. If you do a good job, I’ll even let you cum inside me. How does that sound?”

“That sounds more like a challenge than a deal. I’m going to eat that pussy until you cream all over my face.”

“That is exactly what I wanted to hear.” With that she bent down and pulled off my boxers. When my head popped loose of the band she let out a small gasp of surprise.

“I didn’t know you weren’t circumcised.”

“I’m sorry I guess I should have told you. If you don’t want to do anything I’ll understand.”

“I didn’t say it was a bad thing. It’s just that I have never seen one in person before.”

“It is kind of rare in America but in other countries it is fairly common.”

“Hmm, I guess you’ll be my first. It’s almost like we are both virgins in that way.”

She gave me a reassuring smile and lent down and took me into her mouth. The feeling of her wet lips closing around my cock head sent shivers down my spine and it radiated throughout my whole body. Her head popped up for a second.

“At least you have the decency to wash it right. I had a girlfriend of mine tell me that one guy she fucked was uncut and he didn’t pull the skin back or anything to wash it. She said it tasted so bad, she almost threw up.”

“Most guys don’t have to worry about it, but I had to learn how to properly …”

I wasn’t able to finish my sentence, when I felt her go back down on me again. Holy shit it was the most amazing feeling in the whole world. She didn’t go very deep, but stayed at the tip and licked my head. Then she pulled off only to lick my cock from base to tip. The feel of her tongue on the underside of my cock was almost enough to blow my load right there. By sheer will power I was able to hold on. She stopped and looked at me for a second with a wicked grin on her face.

“Let me know if this hurts. I want you to enjoy your first blowjob, not make it a regrettable experience.”

She put me back in her mouth and looked up at me. She gave me a wink as she started to take more of me into her hot wet mouth. I could feel my foreskin start to pull back and only suffered mild discomfort from it. It wasn’t enough for me to tell her to stop. The pleasure she was giving me far outweighed pain she was causing me. Plus I didn’t really know blowjob etiquette. I know I needed to stop her if it really hurt but I didn’t want to offend her in any way. I was kind of hoping this was going to be the beginning of a long and happy relationship and I didn’t want to fuck it up.

Deeper and deeper she went until about five inches were in her mouth and throat. She started to bob up and down on my stiff member semi-rapidly. I was in heaven and true to form it didn’t take long until I was on the verge of a massive orgasm. I tried to warn her I was getting close.

“Chris… Holy Shit. I’m gonna cum.”

Christy smiled around my cock and then went faster. I placed my hands on the back of her head and tried as hard as I could not to shove her head further down. Then the most explosive orgasm hit me like a runaway freight train. Christy knew I was close and locked her lips around her my cock and began to frantically stroke me. Her tongue licked the underside of my cock head and apparently that mecidiyeköy escort bayan was my button. My whole body went stiff and rigid. My cock swelled and I sent 6 ropes of creamy baby batter into her mouth. After the wave of euphoria rolled over me, all I could do is lie there and gasp for air. I was in my own little world of, until I could feel Christy licking my cock trying to clean it. I sat up and leaned on my elbows again to look at her.

She let go of my cock and opened her mouth. She swirled my cum around in her mouth to show me she was about to swallow. With a large gulp my load was gone down her throat.

“Well that was a surprise.”

“What was a surprise”, I had a worried look on my face.

“Your cum taste so good. It was like eating a pineapple. You must eat a lot of fruit.”

“I do, it is part of my diet. I didn’t know it would affect the taste of my jizz though.”

“Ever heard the term you are what you eat. You must be a fruit salad.”

We both laughed at that. I was feeling a little worried, because of what was supposed to come next. I know I had bragged that I was going to make her cream in my mouth; however, I was inexperienced and a little nervous. Christy noticed that my earlier bravado was gone and was replaced by a look of apprehension.

“Don’t worry about it, Paul. I know you haven’t done any of this before. I’ll guide you through it.”

I don’t think there could have been a better woman for me to learn from. She seemed to be so understanding and almost like she could not wait to deprive a young man of his virginity.

“Kiss me.”


“Look, Paul, one of the hottest things you can do for a girl is to kiss her right after she has just given you a blowjob. Especially since she was so willing to swallow your cum, and even more so when she is willing to kiss you right after you eat her out. It is only proper etiquette. So kiss me.” She said with a smile.

I wasn’t real sure about this. The thought of kissing a girl right after she just blew me had never occurred to me as a possibility. She was right though. If she was willing to suck me off and swallow, I should be willing to kiss her afterwards. So I stood up and took her into my arms. Looked deeply into those beautiful eyes and kissed her. It was a deep passionate kiss. Our tongues wrestled inside each other’s mouths. I could taste a little of myself on her tongue, but at this point I didn’t care. We made out for several minutes. I guess we kind of lost track of time, before we knew It I was hard again. She giggled when she felt me harden against her abdomen. She pulled back only slightly so she could whisper.

“Looks like someone is ready for round two. You are still going to eat me out though. After giving this beautiful cock a good sucking, I need a release.”

“MY pleasure.”

Taking my cue from her, I spun us around and pushed her onto her back. She laughed with surprise and sat up on her elbows. She had this look of wanton desire on her face and I was going to sate the desire even if it killed me.

“I like it when a man takes charge and knows what he wants.”

She brought her knees up to her chest and spread her legs out as wide as she could get them. Before my eyes sat the most beautiful pussy I had ever seen. Coming from a guy who has seen more porn than your average horny male, I had seen a lot of pussies. I could not wait to dive in and try to make this gorgeous woman cum on my tongue.

I knelt down and slowly started to kiss my way to her pussy. I started with the inner thigh and worked my way closer. She giggled a little at my touch.

“Paul, that tickles.” Was all she said.

As I went lower her giggles turned into small cooing sounds. When I was finally at my destination, I licked from the bottom of her labia to the top where her clit was hidden by its hood. She moaned with pleasure. I wanted to take it slow so I ignored her clit for a little bit. I concentrated on her outer labia and sucked those beautiful folds of flesh into my mouth. She seemed to really enjoy this. Then I started to work on her inner lips and probe her love canal with my tongue. Her hands came to the back of my head and started to pull on me.

“Geez, you really know how to tease a girl. I thought you had never done this before?”

I raised my head to say something but she stopped me.

“Don’t stop now! Not after you have me all worked up.”

I put my head back down and continued my assault on her lovely sex petals. While I was working on her small inner lips a thought had occurred to me. I wonder if she has ever had her ass licked. Taking a chance and knowing that this could ruin the chances of me going any further, I lowered my had and licked her pink little puckered ass. She squealed with surprise and delight. She was moaning much louder now and I could tell she was on the verge of a huge orgasm. That is when I raised my head a little and sucked her no protruding clit into my mouth. She gasped and moaned even louder. mecidiyeköy eskort Her hands were almost to the point of ripping my hair out. I slowly inserted a finger and curled my finger up and started to stimulate her G-spot. Her hips bucked up wildly and then it was all over for her. She came and I mean she came hard. She was moaning and gasping for air. Her hands were pulling and grasping the back of my head. She was heaving and bucking like crazy. It lasted for a solid minute before she relaxed and collapsed onto the bed.

She laid there eyes shut and breathing heavily. I couldn’t help but be a little proud of my accomplishment. After a few minutes of recovery she sat up and looked at me with a wicked smile on her face.

“Are you sure you’re a virgin? That doesn’t seem like something a virgin could do.

“I watch a lot of porn.”

“You didn’t see that in any porn.”

“Ok I also read some books written by women on how to please women.”

“Well I can’t fault a man for studying. It is just good to know you can put theory into practice.”

“Does that mean you are gonna’ let me cum inside you?”

“You bet your ass it does. That has got to be the most intense orgasm I have ever had. I have never had a guy lick my ass before. How did you know I would like it?”

“I didn’t. I was just hoping you would. I took a gamble and went for it.”

“Well your gamble is about to pay off. Come here.”

Christy scooted further onto the bed and I quickly followed. She lay down on her back and motioned for me to get between her spread legs. I moved on top of her and nestled my hips between her wide spread thighs. She grabbed my cock and lined it up with her opening and then looked deeply into my eyes. I think I saw love there.

“You won’t last very long so when you need to just cum. Don’t worry about me. I don’t want you to think about anything, but that big load of cum you are gonna’ shoot into me ok.”


She gave me a nod and I pushed forward. Her pussy was so wet and warm from our earlier activity, that I slid in without much trouble. She was tighter than I had expected. We both moaned from the sensation of me entering her. She looked up at me and smiled.

“So how does it feel to be inside your first pussy? What you expected?”

“I can’t believe I have waited so long to do this. This is the most amazing thing I have ever felt. Your pussy is gripping my cock like a glove.”

“That’s the point. I can contract my muscles and make it tighter, almost like a hand grasping your wonderful cock.”

“It feels so fucking good.”

“Good, now start fucking me.”

I nodded and slowly pulled out almost all the way and then pushed back in to the hilt. Our pelvises met and that is when another idea hit me. I had to make her cum on my cock and I thought I knew just how to do that. I pulled out and pushed back in, but this time when our bodies met, I ground the base of my cock against her clit. She gasped and moaned when I did that. I knew I would last a little longer because I had already cum, so I picked up the pace and kept grinding into her clit. She was moaning and scratching me with her finger nails.

I laid flat on top of her and brought my mouth to her ear. I sucked on her ear lobe and kissed her neck. She was really getting into it now. My thrust was met with a thrust of her own. We were both grinding now. She was close and I could feel her inner walls contracting on me. The only problem was that I could also feel my orgasm approaching quickly. She was right I wasn’t going to last very long. Hopefully, I would last long enough. We were thrusting much faster now.

She was gasping for air and moaning just like before. I knew she was just about to go over the edge and so was I. She tried to say something.

“I can’t … I can’t believe you are gonna’ make me cum. HOLY SHIT, this feels so good.”

“Christy, I’m very close.” I moaned into her ear.

“Just let it go baby. Cum inside me. Let me have all that tasty cum.”

Her words were too much and it sent me over the edge. I gave one last hard thrust and buried my cock all the way inside her. I could feel my cum shoot up my cock and out the tip. She must have felt it to, because she moaned so load it took me by surprise. She was cumming with me and I could not have been happier. We were both gasping for air and moaning each other’s name. Finally, after shooting my load into her and giving her yet another orgasm, I rolled over to lie next to her. Her eyes were closed and she was catching her breath. Never have I seen something so beautiful. Her beautiful pale skin almost glowed. Her firm breast and lovely hair was wet from the energy we had just exerted. She was breathing normally now, and she rolled to her side to face.

“Well that was unexpected.” She said with a satisfied smile across her beautiful lips.

“What do you mean?”

“I didn’t expect you to blow my fucking mind like that. When you told me you were a virgin I was just happy to be your first. I didn’t know you were going to be my best.”

“Really, I was your best?”

“No doubt. I have never cum like that before in my life. If this is what you can do on your first time, what the hell is going to happen when you get more experience and control? I want to be here and find out.”

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